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Tuesday, May 24, 2011

GI Lagoon

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While pushing off the wall, submerging under the water, I felt a shiver run up my spine.”This water is cold”I said to my self. I soon rolled to breath.While getting back into breathing position,I accidentally gulped a mouth full of water, Ew I said in my head “it was Gross”.

With a powerful kick I submerged under the water and sent spray flying like a bunch of fish splashing in the water. I quickly turned to my breathing position. “ I wonder if Tyla sent spray flying.

3 comments:

  1. Hello Porscha

    I really like your story about swimming, I really like it how you used interesting vocab and speech marks. Thank you very much for commenting on my blog.

    Keep up the good work.
    From Lola

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  2. jasmine...june5 2011 3.23pm
    cool story porscha hahahahahahahahahahaha

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  3. Hi Porscha,
    Really good story about the GI lagoon. I really liked the way you used different types of sentences and great vocab! Keep up the good work!

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