Monday, March 4, 2013

The day everything was disappearing

“Sitting there, like any other morning doing my work”. BOOM!. “I fell onto the floor with no idea what happened, until, I looked around the classroom”. “Everything was fading into the warm air”. Help, Help!! No one answered. “It was like the whole world was dying, right in front of me”

“Yuuus, I can see Mrs Nua, heavily breathing while I was sprinting to her as fast as I could, she was fading very slowly”. “She wanted me to grab her hand.... but it was too late”. “That was me thinking I was free from doing any work whatsoever, so I went to go play on my netbook and go on any game I wanted to”.  “A half hour later... WHY! WHY!. I was balling my eyes out”.

Thinking in my head, will my family have disappeared? Will I disappear soon? “All of these questions to be answered”. “Walking outside I felt a shiver rush through my body, brrrrr, I was shaking. “I was walking towards the street, I laid one tiny bit of the rubber from my shoe, then the whole thing just collapsed on my LEG!

“Trying to crawl my way out of the wood, I eventually got out, limping towards room 22, I felt the cold wind again, shaking off my body still wondering what it was”. It felt like someone was there ,watching me. “ Shrugging my shoulders then limping back into the room, then face planting onto the floor”. “Yep, just my lucky day”. “Then all of a sudden someone knocked on the door, knock knock knock”. ‘Trying to look back but my neck felt like it just got kicked’.

“Walking outside, thinking the concrete wouldn’t fade away, but no I had to walk outside”. AAAAAAAH!! “I fell into a dark hole”...... “My head flicked right back, I was in my classroom the whole time sleeping”

This morning we all completed our first writing sample for 2013. I have posted it just as I wrote it in the 40 minutes that we were given, so that through out this year I will be able to look back and reflect on the progress I have made in my writing, I will post my learning goal from this soon.

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