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Wednesday, March 16, 2011

At the Swimarama lagoon

Wednesday,16Th of March 2011
Yes!!! camp has started could not wait for this very special day. I got up got ready to go on our first camp trip to Swimarama. I went to school . When I got there I went straight into the hall with some of my friends. We went out side to play but then the bell went which meant that we were going to go on the bus. I was really exited. When we got to the pools we were racing. and we having turns at going on the hydro-slide
I only got 1 turn but the rest got 2.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Porscha
    I really enjoyed your story about swim a Rama.

    But maybe you need to make your story a bit longer and have more detail.And have more paragraphs about diffrent thing you did that day

    your friend Ashlee

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